Awesome, making those into eyeballs. Like the poem, esp how the last line is a lil' haunting. Am I a them? After this poem is over, will I be hunted after the narrator and the person s/he is talking to are done talking?
@AutumnStrength - I edited it so that it looked like eyeballs. I wish I had photoshop to make it look more realistic. @godfatherofgreenbay - Thank you.
@TrainTrack - {{{hugs}}}. You have to fight to not live in sorrow and sometimes it is harder than others. This piece, is mostly a love poem for someone I know I shouldn't love.
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@wordyferalvelociraptor - they are anyone who gets taken out with them.
Awesome, making those into eyeballs. Like the poem, esp how the last line is a lil' haunting. Am I a them? After this poem is over, will I be hunted after the narrator and the person s/he is talking to are done talking?
@AutumnStrength - I edited it so that it looked like eyeballs. I wish I had photoshop to make it look more realistic.
@godfatherofgreenbay - Thank you.
great work
Look like eyeballs.
@Journal2myself - Thank you.
@TrainTrack - {{{hugs}}}. You have to fight to not live in sorrow and sometimes it is harder than others. This piece, is mostly a love poem for someone I know I shouldn't love.
A powerful piece of art. I would have to agree.
i feel the same; tired of living in sorrow
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